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Друзья, помогите, пожалуйста, мне с английским :) Исправьте, пожалуйста, ошибки в моем сочинении: Part of our family budget is spent on utilities. We should each month to pay for electricity, internet, water and something else. I go to the post office every month and pay utility bills for our apartment. A few days before New Year's my family buy gifts for our family and friends. Of course, all of them are very grateful and congratulate the holidays and wish you all the best. In the summer, on vacation, we usually visit different places. It seems to me that we spend a lot of money on holiday. But how can you not love the warm sea and beautiful sunsets Kuban.

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2 предложение Each month we should pay дальше правильно

3 предложение every month лучше поставить в конец или в начало, и я бы написала to a post office

4 предложение не нужно писать a few days, before New Year members of my family buy gifts/presents to each other and to their/our friends.  Следующее предложение я бы убрала вообще, оно составлено неправильно. Нужно написать так: Of course, it takes a lot of money to buy new year`s presents, but smiles of our relatives and friends are more important than money. 

6 предложение On summer vacations дальше правильно, можно добавить of interest

7 предложение holidays 

8 предложение составлено правильно