Question

Помогите кто хорошо знает английский, исправьте ошибки если есть( я писала сама )
My favorite holiday is Christmas, because it is a holiday of childhood. The day before Christmas all eat tangerines and write letters to Santa Claus. More i like Christmas, because it's a family holiday. Christmas a magical and joyful holiday.

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My favourite holiday is Christmas, because it is a holiday of my childhood. The day before Christmas everyone eats tangerines and writes letters to Santa Claus. I also like Christmas, because it's a family holiday. Christmas is a magic and joyful holiday.