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Now I'm at the College

I was born in nineteen eighty nine in Moscow.

In two thousand fifth I graduated from school

and in two thousand eighth I graduated from technological college.

In that year i came to gym the first time.

Sometime label to bodybuilding became my favorite kind of sport.

In a year ceased to be engaged in bodybuilding because of problems.

I returned to sport in 2011.

I chose the best systems of training and tested them on myself

In future i want to participate in weightlifting competitions 

on a rank of the candidate and the master of sports.

During trainings I reached good results for participation in competitions.

Now except bodybuilding I own fighting arts nun chuck.

I want to become the bodybuilding coach and to train adults and children.

In the future I want to open a network of gyms.

Except my main sports.

Over time I want to study fighting sambo.

 

Answer 1

I'm a student of  the College now.

I was born in nineteen eighty nine in Moscow.

I graduated from school in two thousand and fifth.

And  I graduated from technological college in two thousand and eighth. 

It was the time when I began to train in a gym.

Some time later bodybuilding became my favorite kind of sport.

In a year I had to give up my training because of some problems.

I returned to sport in two thousand and eleventh .

I chose the best systems of training and tested them on myself.

I want to participate in weightlifting competitions in the future.

I want to be Candidate Master and the Master of sports.

During my trainings I reached some good results during my participation in different competitions not only in bodybuilding.

I am fond of fighting arts and nunchaku too.

I want to become the bodybuilding trainer and to teach adults and children.

My dream is  to open a network of gyms in the future.

Over time I want to study fighting sambo.