Question

Найдите, пожалуйста, ошибки и укажите их. МНОГО БАЛЛОВ!
Текст - I'd like to tell you about my friend. His name Mike. We met him in the park. It was summer. He is very tall, plump body. He was then fourteen years old. His face was oval. Hair long and black. Brown eyes and a small nose. I like it because it is pleasant to communicate with him and we have common interests. We love dogs.

Answer 1

Это английский, не русский. Здесь каждый раз надо писать местоимения, они как в русском не опускаются ;)
I'd like to tell you about my friend. His name is Mike. We met him in the park. It was in summer. He was very tall and had a plump body. He was then fourteen years old. His face was oval. He had long and black hair. Also, he had brown eyes and a small nose. I like him because it is pleasant to communicate with him and we have common interests. For example, we love dogs.