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Kazakh national dishes are very tasty. Kymyz is drink from mare's milk. Beshbarmak is traditional meat and flour dishes nomadic peoples. Baursaks is traditional Kazakh flour products.
Kazakhstan has a very beautiful place. You can go to Bayterek. is a monument and observation tower in Astana. State National Natural Park "Burabay“. Charyn Canyon - stretching for 154 km along the canyon of Charyn river in Kazakhstan.
Most people have heard of Genghs Khan, so maybe they think we’re a very fierce people. But most of us are friendly and quite polite. They’re kind.
Some people think that Kazakh's people lives in a yurts. They before lives in yurts. But now people don’t lives in yurts.They lives in always houses.
Kazakhs realy good at sport. Peoples very successful at cycling, boxing and ice hockey.

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Kazakh national dishes are very tasty. Kymyz is drinking from mare's milk. Beshbarmak is traditional meat and flour dishes nomadic peoples. Borax is traditional Kazakh flour products.Kazakhstan has a very beautiful place. You can go to Bayterek. Is a monument and an observation tower in Astana. State National Natural Park "Burabay“. Charyn Canyon - stretching for 154 km along the canyon of Charyn river in Kazakhstan.Most people have heard of Genghs Khan, so maybe they think we’re a very fierce people. But most of us are friendly and quite polite. They’re kind. Some people think that Kazakh's people live in a yurt.They have before lived in yurts. But now people haven’t lived in yurts. They live in always houses. Kazakhs really good at sport. Peoples very successful at cycling, boxing and ice hockey.