Question

Проверти пожалуйста текст! Если есть ошибки, укажите где именно. Onse, as a child, we went on a picnic. I took an old teddy bear. We arrived in the village. Parents began to disassemble things. At that time, i was walking around the bushes. Strolling i lost the bear.But then I bought a new teddy bear.I remember that day because I lost a favorite toy.

Answer 1

не onse - once 
вроде бы больше нету