Question

Проверьте пожалуйста))) Oz: the Great and Powerful. The fantasy adventure film darected by Sam Raimi. When tornado throw circus magician Jscar Diggs (James Franco) he come in the Land of Oz. He think, that found fame and wealth. But him neeed prove that he it is really magiacian win evil and free Land Oz. This is film spectacular and very vivid. There are brilliant special effects too. This is film not bad. But it very kids.

Answer 1

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Answer 2

Oz: the Great and Powerful. The fantasy adventure film is  directed by Sam Raimi. When tornado throws circus magician Jscar Diggs (James Franco) he comes to the Land of Oz. He thinks, that found fame and wealth. But he needs to  prove that he is a real magiacian and to  win evil and free Land Oz. This is a spectacular and very vivid film. There are brilliant special effects too. This is  not bad film. But it is for kids.