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(Описывала любимую детскую фотографию с нового года)
I want to tell you about my favorite photo. It was taken on my New Year's holiday in nursery school. My mother took the photo, when I was standing near the fir-tree .I was dressed in beautiful costume like all the other children and was very happy at this moment. I just have to look at this photo and the memories of a wonderful childhood come back. I like this photo because when I look at it I fell the New Year's mood. I enjoy this holiday very much.

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I want to tell you about my favorite photo. It was taken on my New Year's holiday in a nursery school. My mother took it when I was standing near the fir-tree. I was dressed in a beautiful costume like all the other children and was very happy at this moment. I just have to look at this photo and the memories of my wonderful childhood come back. I like this photo because when I look at it I feel the New Year's mood. I enjoy this holiday very much.