Question

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Often people surrender oneself over to influence whose that was not бы looks and opinions.I consider,that it is important to have own opinion.To act because you consider.And if you repose in an own rightness, it is necessary to go to the end, and not to think of that, whether it coincides with opinion other.

Answer 1

Да, текст составлен верно только после точек и запятых пробел.