Question

ДАМ 20 БАЛЛОВ!!! ПРОВЕРЬТЕ СОЧИНЕНИЕ И ИСПРАВЬТЕ ОШИБКИ ПОЖАЛУЙСТАААААААААААА" ОЧЕНЬ НАДО
my name is Ksenia, I'm 16 years old. I live in a small provincial town of Shadrinsk. our country has always called Trans-Urals. our city is called an example for all profintsialnyh cities in Russia. It is small and cozy. city residents are very friendly and everyone knows each other. The nature of our region rduet eyes, especially beautiful in autumn, when the fields are painted in different colors.
in our city has a city park, where many people like to spend weekends riding on amusement. My school is located in the heart of the city. our city is one big no wealth, there is no good university where you can get a decent education. For this reason, the majority of students after graduation go to the big cities.
Of course as with any drgom town has some small flaws, but they are often unnoticed. in the city where I live there is a very regular life. Of course I love him because of this is where I was born.

Answer 1

все правильно. но я непоняла rduet(eyes) и rdgom (town)?

Answer 2

все норм пиши ))
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