Question

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Нужно сделать "поэму" о своей семье, с сравнениями с животными
У меня получилось так:

My family
My mom is as cute as a cat
She takes care of me <3
My dad is as important as a lion
He plays me and he very funny!
My brother is as little as an mouse
He little crazy, but very cool!
My granny is as clever as a owl
She love reading books
My grandpa is as proud as an peacock
He make laugh me
I am is as playful as an hamster
I`m very love my family!

Answer 1

1,3,5,7,9,11 строки первое as убери.
Последняя строка измени very love на love very much/