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Hi Paul,
Thank you for your last letter. Hope you are ok. I went with my family to the planetarium in Moscow.
The tour began with the Urania Museum, named after the Muse of Astronomy. We were greeted by a wax statue of an astrologer, surrounded by old books, engravings, instruments, and everything needed for science. In the windows of the same hall are all kinds of instruments, telescopes, instruments and hourglass. After that , we went to the Great Star Hall, where with the help of the most modern equipment, an illusion of flight through space and time is created.
In the planetarium we were told about the planets, constellations, the history of our planet and the future of our galaxy. We seemed to fly on a superfast ship, overcoming space and time, observing through the porthole the most important events on our planet that have made the fate of the earth. I hope I will go back soon as I leaned so much and had a lot of fun.
All in all, a had really fantastic day. I really enjoyed hiking with my family is a planetarium. I'm planning to go back again with my friends next month.
That's all for now,
Anna

Answer 1

Да вроде нормально всё.Или это я в английском плоха)