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ПОМОГИТЕ !!! можете пожалуйста исправить текст так чтобы он смысл не потерял но был на уровне 7 класса.
Tobias, the guitarist in the genre of melodic percussive Fingerstyle. Now 30 years old. Born in the capital of Germany, started learning to play the guitar at the age of 14 years as self-taught. Since then, played 6-8 hours a day. Played mostly rock and other areas of heavy music, such as songs group: Metallica, Papa roach, Nirvana and Linkin Park. Some time later he organized his first band "Synatic" with some friends from school.For many years he worked as a private guitar teacher. In 2008, he began studying music in one of the oldest cities in Germany, Cologne and there have been several projects with an acoustic guitar. About himself Tobias says that music became his passion, and this is not the case when the word "passion" is the exaggeration. I will read you a quote: ears are at all, everyone loves music, but only for the sound guy, the music becomes a way of cognition of himself. That's why I like and want to imitate Tobias Rauscher.

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Tobias is the guitar player in the genre of melodic percussive Fingerstyle. He was born in Berlin and he is 30 years old now. He  started to play the guitar at the age of 14. He didn’t have the teacher and he played 6-8 hours a day to improve his technic. He played mostly rock and heavy music, such as music of Metallica, Papa roach, Nirvana, Linkin Park and other bands. Later he organized his first band "Synatic" with his school friends. He also was guitar teacher for many years. In 2008, he began studying music in one of the oldest Cities of Germany, Cologne. He leaded several acoustic guitar projects there. Tobias says that music became his passion, and the  word "passion" is not an exaggeration here. He thinks that the music can become a way of cognition only for extraordinary person. That's why I like this musician and want to imitate Tobias Rauscher.