Question

Как переделать (изменить) текст, для того чтобы пересказать его от 3-его лица
Sophie's blog.
Pop shop, in the Westgate shopping centre, are having a big weekend sale, don't often buy clothes there because I can't afford it, it's just too expensive for me. But yesterday they had a special sale there and everything was cheaper than usual. They had a discount of between 20% and 50% on most of the things there. I found a real bargain a jacket that cost just £35 instead of £120! That's great value for money because it's really cheap for a jacket made by a top designer. I paid with the cash that my parents gave me for my birthday. I gave the shop assistant a £50 note and they gave me £15 change. I asked for the receipt because if you have problems afterwards you need to have proof that you bought it in that particular shop. Once l bought a coat, but then I decided didn't like it. I didn't want to waste my money so l took it back and, luckily, they gave me a refund. Anyway, all bargain-hunters go down to Pop Shop! The sale ends at 5 pm today

Answer 1

Sophie's blog.
Pop shop, in the Westgate shopping centre, are having a big weekend sale, Sophi doesn't often buy clothes there because she can't afford it, it's just too expensive for her. But yesterday they had a special sale there and everything was cheaper than usual. They had a discount of between 20% and 50% on most of the things there. SHE found a real bargain a jacket that cost just £35 instead of £120! That's great value for money because it's really cheap for a jacket made by a top designer. SHE paid with the cash that HER parents gave her for her birthday. She gave the shop assistant a £50 note and they gave her £15 change. She asked for the receipt she need to have proof that she bought it in that particular shop. Once she had bought a coat, but then she decided that she didn't like it. She didn't want to waste her money so she took it back and, luckily, they gave her a refund. Anyway, all bargain-hunters go down to Pop Shop! The sale ends at 5 pm today