Question

помогите пожалуйста,исправьте если есть ошибки(они полюбому есть)
и подойдет ли такое описание??
заранее спасибо)

Hello!
Yesterday I went to Hard Rock café in London. In this café the go families , groups of friends, teenagers and tourists. In a café a lot of different dishes and drinks, for example burgers , chips , steaks , salads , sandwiches , coke , fruit cocktails , coffee and fizzy drinks. Waiters serve quick and friendly. The atmosphere in the cafe mint , cool , modern , dynamic , fun and exciting.

Answer 1

Hello! 
Yesterday I went to Hard Rock café in London. families , groups of friends, teenagers and tourists go to this cafe. There are lot of different dishes and drinks, for example: burgers , chips , steaks , salads , sandwiches , coke , fruit cocktails , coffee and fizzy drinks. Waiters serve quickly and are very kind. The atmosphere in the cafe is mint , cool , modern , dynamic , fun and exciting.

Answer 2

Все правильно) ) но Waiters serve quick and friendly в переводе будет "Официанты служат быстрым и дружелюбным") Лучше пусть так "Waiters work fast and friendly"; и да это описание) ))