Question

можете, пожалуйста, проверить письмо по английскому

Dear Alina,
Thank you for the letter! I hope, you are well! And now I'm writing about me and answering your questions.
My favorite hobbies are ice skating and learning Chinese. I wrote about it in the past letter. Also I like making photos. It's very interesting process. I have to find right, new andand beautiful angles and perspectives. By the way, all of my customers like my works. But now I'm only a student and I'm studing photography the second year.
What about you? Do you have more one hobby? What is it? Do you want to arrange a photosession? Do you want to be a madel in my photoshoot?
I'm looking forward to seeing you!
From Ann.

Answer 1

не past а last
надо писать do you have more than one hobby


но так очень хорошее задержанное письмо

Answer 2

1) in the last letter
2) Do you have more than one.. - больше одного
3) не madel, а model