Question

Я написал сочинение, уже его перевел, кто может поправить что там не так. Переводил переводчиком, думаю перевел он скверно.

Classmates, we agreed to go to the theatre. This was my first visit to the theatre. Had to go away, so I left early in the morning. On the way I thought looks like the theater building , what he is inside. When we were at the threshold of the theater, I saw that he was much prettier than I had imagined. Then we went inside, inside he was just amazing, the interior struck me. After some time the show started. They put me in a joyful mood , i am so involved in the action that i forget that i am watching a play. This view teaches us to find your way in life. it performance makes you laugh and happy. After the first trip to the theater I can say that I liked the theatre.

Answer 1

Among my cassmates, we agreed to go to the theatre. This was my first visit to the theatre. It was a long way from my house, so I left early in the morning. On the way I thought what the theater building looked like inside. When we were at the threshold of the theater, I saw that it was much prettier than I had imagined. Then we went inside. It was just amazing, the interior struck me. After some time the show started. I was in a joyful mood, I was so involved in the action that I forgot that I am watching a play. That play teaches us to find your way in life. The performance makes you laugh and feel happy. After my first visit to the theater I can say that I like it.