Question

Is it possible to imagine our life without computers? No, of course. The twenty first century is a century of technology. Computers now are an essential part of our life. That's why I want to speculate about the pros and cons of computer.
I believe that the computer gives a lot of new possibilities. the computer is a source of information, means of communication and a great helper in education and in life. The computer helps time to take:it is possible to watch an interesting movie, edit photos,and listen to music .
Many believe that computers are ruining our health. Also a lot of kids suffer from video game addiction
But all this can be avoided if to observe safety measures: to sit at the correct distance from the screen, to ventilate the room and don't forget about physical development. if you do Not abuse the computer, then it will benefit
Пожалйста,проверьте сочинение по английскому .

Answer 1

в 3 предложении тире после века... а так все идеально))) УДАЧИ тебе)