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My name is Sabir. I'll tell you about my family castle. Our family is not very big. The queen of the castle is my mother. I am the Prince of the castle. And the princess of the castle is my sister. A scared sister married a prince from another karolevstva and lives with him.
My mother keeps our castle in good condition. Our fortress withstands any enemy attacks. My sister likes to sit in her room and guess through the magic mirror. And I'm learning to ride a horse and I could use the sword. I dream of fighting the dragon in the future.
In our castle there are many different portraits, statues and secret rooms. Many things have been preserved since our grandmothers and grandfathers. We always like to dine together. At the table we always have a lot of different food.
I love my castle and my family.

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My name is Sabir. I'll tell you about my family castle. Our family is not very big. The queen of the castle is my mother. I am the Prince of the castle. And the princess of the castle is my sister. A scared sister married a prince from another kingdoms and lives with him. My mother keeps our castle in good condition. Our fortress withstands any enemy attacks. My sister likes to sit in her room and guess through the magic mirror. And I'm learning to ride a horse and I could use the sword. I dream of fighting the dragon in the future. In our castle there are many different portraits, statues and secret rooms. Many things have been preserved since our grandmothers and grandfathers. We always like to dine together. At the table we always have a lot of different food. I love my castle and my family. вот так правильно