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1.About Myself
Let me tell you a few words about myself. My name is Alisa. I am 19 years old. I from Russia. I come from a large family. All members of my family are helpful and friendly. There are four of us in the family. We get on well with each other. I have a father a mother and younger sister. He is student. I am a second-year student. My major is Customs Matter. Now I would like to tell you about my interests. I am keen on sport. What about my character I am a polite person. I am a communicative person and I have a lot of friends. My dream is to travel around the world.
2.My Day
I get up every day at 5 o’clock. L take a shower and have breakfast. Every morning my mother cookies breakfast for me. Ten I go to university. I get to the university by bus. Every day I have 3-4 lessons. I study a lot of subjects such as history. My favorite subject is history. After university I go home. I do my homework after diner and I have free time. I can read, watch TV. I go to bed at 8 o’clock. I love to get up early. I am an early bird. I have a younger sister. Her name Василина. Mu birthday is September second.
3.My Family
My mom is a good-looking woman with wavy long hair falls over her shoulders. She is brunette, her eyes are green and blue. I suppose we look alike. My dad is a middle-aged man with black hair and hazel eyes. He is very kind and even-tempered person. Sometimes he can be obstinate, but all his thoughts and ideas are full of sense. I get along with him. In conclusion, I want to say that my family gave me a lot and I appreciate it very much. I think there are no other people in the world I would love more.
4.My Profession
There are many different professions in the world. Have my dad works in the miner and moms at the coach. They like to do what they love. Every morning I saw them go to work with such greed. I would like to work with such greed. I would like to work in the specialty of customs when I graduate form university. I will try to do everything in my power for this.

Answer 1

1. About Myself

1) I am from Russia.

2) I have a father a mother and a younger sister.

3) He is student. кто? о ком речь? Сестра - she и + артикль a student.

2. My Day

1) I get up at 5 o’clock every day.

2) I take a shower and have breakfast.

3) Every morning my mother cooks breakfast for me.

4) Then I go to the university.

5) I study a lot of subjects such as history. + добавьте ещё предметы

6) I do my homework after dinner and I have free time.

7) Her name is Vasilina.

8) My birthday is on the second of September.

3. My Family

1) She is brunette, her eyes are green and blue. зелёные или голубые глаза?

2) He is very kind and an even-tempered person.

3) In conclusion, I would like to say that my family give (или gives) me a lot and I appreciate it very much.

4. My Profession

1) My dad works in the miner and mom (у вас одна мама?) at the coach.

2) Every morning I see them go to their work with such greed.

3) I would like to work with such greed, too.