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From my very birth, my parents loved to capture important life moments for me. This photo is one of them. This photo was taken when I was eleven years old. I moved to another city and made new friends who invited me to visit me. To the right in a white dress I stand, to the left in a yellow dress my friend Alena, and in the middle my friend Gleb. On that day, we all played together in the blind man's bluff, and I remember how then we began to tell each other funny stories. This photo is very important for me, because these guys are my best friends to this day, and due to the fact that they do not like to be photographed, there are very few joint photos of us, so I keep it in my album. I want to share my joyful memories with you, so I decided to show you a photo so important to me.

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Исправьте, пожалуйста, все грамматические и лексические ошибки

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From my birth, my parents loved to capture important life moments for me. This photo is one of them. This photo was taken when I was eleven years old. I moved to another city and made new friends who invited me to visit. To the right in a white dress I stand, to the left in a yellow my friend Alena, and in the middle my friend Gleb. On that day, we all played together in the blind man's bluff, and I remember how then we began to tell each other funny stories. This photo is very important for me, because these guys are my best friends to this day, and due to the fact that they do not like to be photographed, there are few JOINED photos of us, so I keep it in my album. I want to share my joyful memories with you, so I decided to show you a photo so important FOR me.