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Once I was left alone at home. I was glad for this, because I can do what I want. About 3 hours passed and I became bored. I heard strange sounds at the top. It scared me. I climbed up, there was nobody there. "Probably it seemed to me," I said. Suddenly this sound became louder. I froze and screamed in horror. My sister came out of that room, she laughed out loud. I was offended, but then it also became funny. Here's a story happened to me.




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Однажды я осталась одна дома. Я была рада этому, потому что смогу делать,что захочу. Прошло около 3 часов и мне стало скучно. Я услышала странные звуки на вверху. Меня это напугало. Я поднялась на вверх,там никого не было."Наверное мне показалось"-сказала я. Вдруг этот звук стал громче. Я замерла и закричала от ужаса. Из той комнаты вышла моя сестра,она громко смеялась. Мне было обидно,но потом тоже стало смешно. Вот такая история со мной приключилась.​ ​

Answer 1

Добрый вечер!То, что испарвила - выделила жирным.

Once I was left alone at home. I was glad for this, because I could do whatever I want. After 3 hours  I was bored. I heard strange sounds upstairs. It scared me. I climbed up, there was nobody there. "Probably it seemed to me," I said. Suddenly this sound became louder. I froze and screamed in horror. My sister came out of that room, she laughed out loud. I was offended, but then it also became funny. Here's a story about what happened to me.

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