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Hi, now I want tell you about famous painter she’s name Anna Lomakina. She was born in Ukraine, city Krivoy Rog. She studied in academy and now her work is free-lance. She like traveling and watching interesting -films. When she was sixteen years old, she painted a very beautiful oil pictures. Then she wanted to try painting digital pictures. It was successfully for her career. She became an illustrator, and now she famous. Her drawings in different styles. She has got many channels like Youtube, Instagram, Facebook and she has got own internet-shop. She is very cool painter. Today lots of people know she like super illustrator for children’s books. It was a little story from me.

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Hi, now I want to tell you about a famous painter whose name is Anna Lomakina. She was born in Ukraine, in the city of Krivoy Rog. She studied at the art academy and now she works as a free-lance artist. She likes travelling and watching interesting  films. When she was sixteen years old, she painted _very beautiful oil pictures. Then she wanted to try painting digital pictures. It was a successful step for her career. She became an illustrator, and now she is famous. She works in different styles. She is active in the social media and has accounts on Youtube, Instagram, Facebook. She also has got her own internet-shop. She is a very cool painter. Today lots of people know her as a great illustrator of children’s books.