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In reply of your advertisment which was in today's edition of The Times. I am writing to apply for the position of Customer Servises Manager in your company.
I graduated from Milan University in 1998, and I have had four years' experience of working in customer services in a company in Italy and Great Britain.
I am currently working in the Customer Services department of a large IT company in Turin. I am responsible for day-to-day running of the department and I am managing a team of three staff members. Last year I implemented a new system of dealing with customer complains which has been extremely successful.
I would like to develop my professional skills and take on more managerial responsibilities. I am also interested in working in London because it will give me the oportunity to improve my English.
I am inclosing a copy of my cv for you reference. I would be happy to come for an interview at any time but I would need a week's notice to make some necessary travel arrangements.