Ребята, нужно проверить текст на ошибки. Прошу прямо душевно, от этого сочинения будет зависеть оценка за семестр, так что милые постарайтесь <3
Birthday it is a wonderful day for everybody. A lot of people like celebrating it. On this day you are in the centre of attention. You can spend time with your friends, parents and you can get a lot of presents.
So, I and my friend have been asked to arrange an event to celebrate a classmate's seventeenth birthday. His name is Mike, and he is the soul of our class, so all classmates will come to the party.
We thought about it a lot and decided to choose from four options. The first option was going to a restaurant. It would be quite easy to organize a party there, but going to a restaurant wouldn't be much fun because we might have to dress formally. Also, it may be expensive. So, the next option was bowling. Here you can have a fun and to compete with friends. That's much sociable, but someone could find it boring, and we must find the most suitable option for everybody. So we began to think about a rock concert that will be held on Mike’s birthday. But later we realized that everyone has their favourite type of music and the tickets might be too expensive.
The best option is going to the cinema because it is nearby and it won't cost a lot of money. All of us go to the cinema regularly, but we've never all been there together. Here Mike will have the best birthday party ever.
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никаких ошибок не увидела
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Всё исправлено.
Birthday it is a wonderful day for everybody. A lot of people like celebrating it. On this day you are in the center of attention. You can spend time with your friends, parents and you can get a lot of presents.
We thought about it a lot and decided to choose from four options. The first option was going to a restaurant. It would be quite easy to organize a party there, but going to a restaurant wouldn't be much fun because we might have to dress formally. Also, it may be expensive. So, the next option was bowling. Here you can have a fun and to compete with friends. That's much sociable, but someone could find it boring, and we must find the most suitable option for everybody. So we began to think about a rock concert that will be held on Mike’s birthday. But later we realized that everyone has their favorite type of music and the tickets might be too expensive.
The best option is going to the cinema because it is nearby and it won't cost a lot of money. All of us go to the cinema regularly, but we've never all been there together. Here Mike will have the best birthday party ever.
Объяснение: Нашел 2 ошибки. Исправил centr на center и favourite на favorite. Слова где были ошибки подчеркнул!