Question

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Me and my friends like club music, because it
raises our spirits. We have fun at it! I also like rock music, because she's
funny. My favorite singer Lana Del Rey. She sings well. Lana Del Rey great
American singer of our time. I am delighted with her ​​new songs. My friend and
I want to go to her concert. This is my dream!

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перевод на рус. яз



Мне и моим
друзьям нравится клубная музыка, потому что она поднимает нам настроение.
 Мы под нее веселимся! Мне еще нравится рок музыка, потому что она
веселая.  Моя любимая певица Лана Дел Рей. Она отлично поет. Лана Дел Рей
великая американская  певица нашего времени. Я в восторге от ее новых
песен. Я и моя подруга хотим сходить на ее концерт. Это моя мечта! 

Answer 1

I and my friends like  club music, because it
raises our spirits. We have fun at it! I love also rock music, because it's
funny. My favorite singer is Lana Del Rey. She sings well. Lana Del Rey is a great
American singer of our time. I am delighted   her ​​new songs. My friends and
I want to goes to her concert. It is my dream!

Answer 2

I and my friends like club music, because it raises our spirits ( лучше сказать: cheers us up). We have fun with it! I also like rock music, because it's full of fun. My favorite singer is Lana Del Rey. She sings very well. Lana Del Rey is a great American singer of our time. I am delighted with her ​​new songs. My friend and I want to go to her concert.  It is my dream!