Question

составить эссэ на английском языке .Тема:вредны ли компьютеры в настоящее время.
я отстаиваю точку что компьютеры не вредны в настоящее время.
в первой части должно быть вступление и краткое описание что должно быть дальше .
во второй части описание чем полезны компьютеры и чем вредны
в третей части отстаивание моей позиции что компьютеры не вредны
в четвёртой части обратное высказывание что компьютеры вредны
и далее вывод
использовать фразы:
What's more -более того
in eddition to it-в добавок к этому
moreover-более того
futher more -к тому же
Also-так же
However-тем не менее
But-но
On the other hand-с другой стороны
To sum up-обобщая сказанное
To conclude-делая вывод
I'd like to say-я бы хотел сказать
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Answer 1

Ответ:

На ))))))

Объяснение:

Hello, today I will tell you what computers are harmful and what they are not. On the mob point of the link, it is not harmful, if you do not overdo it.

They are harmful because if you sit at the computer a lot, your head and eyes will hurt. This worsens health.!But,on the other hand,thanks to computers, you can study and learn something new is cool

Also,I'd like to say,in my opinion, they are not harmful if you do not sit for a long time. Computers are an ideal place for communication between people, thanks to a computer we can learn, communicate, write, draw, whatever. It pleases

The main thing is not to sit on the computer a lot, it is very harmful, especially if you play a lot without a break

Also,to conclude,on the one hand computers are good on the other hand bad!)

Answer 2

Ответ:

Are computers harmful nowadays or not? We always hear that computers are very harmful from parents and sometimes teachers. There's some truth but I believe that computers give us more benefit than harm.

On the one hand, computers are very useful nowadays, - you can meet your friends with out going out from house, relax by playing games or watching films and also work on it. On the other hand, you can spoil your eyes or become lazy.

Why I think that computers aren't harmful? Imagine a world with out computers. It'll be impossible to study in epidemic of Coronavirus, doing new discoveries where humanity needs computer equipment and impossible to know news with out going out from home.

How can the computer be harmful? It can spoil your eyes if your are using it most time of the day and you can become lazy because of habit to play games all free time.

To conclude, computers are really needed nowadays and if you know the limits it won't be harmful at all

От себя: по сути написал всё что просилось, но в вывод запихать столько фраз когда там нужно всего одно предложение, банально было невозможно