Question

Проверьте, пожалуйста, эссе на англ. Наверное очень много ошибок ><
day begun at 6:30 a.m. This bio alarm clock is a miracle! I wake up on time and without difficulties. I don't know how it works. I think it affects in the brain by radio waves and person wakes up by himself without irritatble ringing. Cooked breakfast. I need to restok the food in the fridge. l told Jarvis to order products from store.
Went to the gym. Before I leaved the apartment I asked Jarvis to cleam the house.
The weather was cold, so my smart clother lengthen the sleeves and became warm.
After gym I went to college. As well there is no need to carry a huge amount of books. You need only one tablet.
Friends invited me to a caffe. Waiters in this caffe were a bit clunky and confused orders. And even batender put in my coffee too much sugar.
When I came home Jarvis turned my favourite songs at full volume. It's good that it is completely soundproof apartment. Neighbours heard nothing.
I looked very old film.
At 9 p.m. I went to sleep
я знаю, что очень плохо( с детства не дружу с этим предметом(

Answer 1

The day started at 6:30 a.m. This bio alarm clock is a miracle! I waked up on time and with no any difficultites. I don't know how it works. I think it affects in the brain by dint of radio waves and a person wakes up by himself without irritable ringing. Breakfast is cooked. I need to resupply the food in the fridge. l told Jarvis to order products from the store.Went to the gym. Before I left the apartment I had asked Jarvis to clean the house.
The weather was cold, so sleeves are extended for my smart clothes and it became warm.
After gym I went to college. As well there was no need to carry a huge amount of books. You need only one tablet.
Friends invited me to a caffe. Waiters in this caffe confused orders and were a bit clunky. And even bartender put in my coffee too much sugar.
When I came home Jarvis turned my favourite songs at full volume. It's good that there is completely soundproof apartment. Neighbours heard nothing.
I looked very old film.
At 9 p.m. I went to sleep