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WHAT MAKES A PERSONALITY?
If I am asked what makes a personality, I would say that no one can define it clearly. Nevertheless, I’ll try to share my personal ideas with you. To begin with, I must say our world is very big. There are many people in the world, and each human being is a personality, a unique individual. One cannot find two similar people. I think your image, your dress, hairstyle, your figure and your face play an important role. I am sure the best way to show your unique personality is to have different clothes, hairstyles and types of make-up. This is the way to prove that you are unlike others and make everyone pay attention to you. But we shouldn’t forget that the inner world of a person, her manner and character are even more important to the community.
Another factor that makes a personality is education. It helps people be more cultured, have a broader outlook, know the surrounding world better.
It’s my personal belief that hard work is the first and foremost thing that makes a personality. Even a man who is extremely talented should work hard to develop his abilities.
One more point that should be mentioned is that leisure is also an essential part of one’s life. I can’t but mention Reynolds’s words: “The real character of a man is found out by his amusements”. It is really true because some people do something both helpful and interesting while others can simply waste their time or even cause damage.
It’s not a secret that a person spends a lot of time with friends. Usually friends share ideas, opinions; listen to the same music and have much in common. Communicating with other people means learning something and following other people’s advice and wisdom.
To sum everything up, I’d like to say that lots of various factors influence a personality. Don’t forget there are no ideal people! And if you want to keep in touch with the world you should try to change yourself in order to become a perfect personality.