Write a description of a place you've visited and know well for a travel magazine. Follow the plan.​

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Ответ дал: nictarswem
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Last summer, I visited an amazing place. The most shocking and breath taking city, London. It was my dream for a couple of years to visit it. It is located in the Uk, and it’s old fashioned where all of the buildings look familiar to me.
One of the most interesting places it is London Warner Bros.studio, it’s a great idea to spend your time there with your family or friends depends with who you are travelling. Another place that is worth to visit is the Freddie Mercuries house, I would say I am quit a fan of him, so if you are the same as me you will love it!!! I promis you! The most Breath Taking View, you can see from is from “The London Eye” you probably can see the whole landscape from it. Amazing I garanti you!
À place that is loved by many tourist is the Stonehenge. I bet you know this place. Many people are interested of visiting it. I’ve been there myself, I truly recommend you visiting it!
London is city of activities and fun. The main thing I would recommend is tasting the delicious plate, called fish and chips. If you are a fan of Harry Potter it’s a good Idea going to the Harry Potter studio Tour. You want regret it.
Over all Uk and London is my most preferable place to visit for beginning of you wold tour journey. Take care!

nellytheelephant: неплохо, если читать вслух)) но для письменной работы слабо. многовато ошибок
nellytheelephant: ошибки тут стилистические, грамматические и даже орфографические (неверно написаны слова)
lolich112: можете удалить первое решение оно вообще неправильное
lolich112: второе решение не хочу писать так как не хочу получить плохую оценку(
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