Question

Dear Mike, How are you? I'm fine and mine /my new school is really good. I like (it)/ its very much. I've got some new friends. John is in my class and his/ he's very funny. He makes my /me laugh. I often hang out with him / his after school. He's / His brother, Luke, is nice, too. He's in a different year. I play basketball with theirs/ them at the weekend. You see, us/ we want to get in the school team next year. Another friend of mine / my is Claire. Hers/ She is quite shy but she's a good laugh. Claire's got a dog like your / yours. He's called Newton. We sometimes take him to the park with ours / us. Anyway, how's life back there? Write soon. Yours, Troy срочнооооо​

Answer 1

Моя відповідь:

I can see that there are a few errors in the letter. Here's a corrected version:

Dear Mike,

How are you? I'm fine and my new school is really good. I like it very much. I've got some new friends. John is in my class and he's very funny. He makes me laugh. I often hang out with him after school. His brother, Luke, is nice, too. He's in a different year. I play basketball with them at the weekend. You see, we want to get in the school team next year. Another friend of mine is Claire. She is quite shy but she's a good laugh. Claire's got a dog like yours. He's called Newton. We sometimes take him to the park with us.

Anyway, how's life back there? Write soon.

Yours,

Troy