Question

Проверьте пожалуйста текст на наличие грамматических и смысловых ошибок. Заранее спасибо!

I am writing to thank you for what you haven't forgotten about my birthday and sent me a gift. It's very nice of you.
You are very hospitable host and I appreciate everything you did to make my stay so memorable. In my room, I felt at home. Your mum bakes is excellent, and I loved her pies.
My English has improved a lot and I have received higher marks. My pronunciation became clearer and I began to make less grammatical mistakes. I am very grateful.
Thank you once again for your kindness and hospitality. I hope we will have the chance to meet again -perhaps you could ever visit us.

Answer 1

Ошибок нет, всё в порядке