Question

This summer I was in Africa. My parents and I were Safsaf oasis. We went on a canoe safari along the Nile. I lived in the tree house. In this house we lived about two weeks. The house includes an oven and a table of clay.

Нужно проверить мини-рассказ (грамматику).

Answer 1

...were IN Safsaf oasis. We went BY canoe... WE lived in the... вместо последнего предложения: This house had an oven and a clay-table.  Вроде остально правильно...

Answer 2

At Safsaf oasis,  
we lived in a tree house. 
In that  house  
a table of clay - a clay table