Question

we talk about britain's young consumers in this lesson and I know more about it. For example, each year over 9 million of teenagers in Britain spend £6 billion and they are the most powerful group of consumers;sweets and chocolates are still the number one best seller, but sales of mobile phone cards are catching up quickly, and they are expected to overtake sweets and chocolates very soon; video game consoles is rapidly replacing board games and reading; quite a lot of teenagers have also joined clubs that involve extreme sports, such as gliding and parachuting. Also, parents handing out a massive £3.3 billion to their teenagers every year.
Teenagers spend their money different . some of them(одни из них) can never resist buying the latest fashions, and eat out with their friends at least once a week. the second of them (вторые) spend their money on snacks, bus fares, going to the gym and going out. the third (третьи) spend it on computer games, CDs, comics, going out - anything really. if talk about how britain teenager get their money,some of them receive money from their parents and they earn earn by doing household chores for my parents, for example.others teenagers have a job .
And almost all teenagers save their money.




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Answer 1

Напиши о вреде этих сладостей,компьютерных играх ну и т.д.И то,что они могли бы потрать эти деньги на что ,то более полезное и еще напиши о том,сколько вреда вызывают сладости у многих английских ребят проблемы с зубами из-за них