ПРОВЕРЬТЕ, ПОЖАЛУЙСТА, на ошибки.
Every day due to terrorism killed many people. Fear for their parents, children and friends accompany us. People seek security and the government supports them. For solving the problems of terrorism governments of different countries strive to establish lasting peace in the world. So start with other countries to cooperate or unite for international meetings, summits, discussions on problems of war and peace, sign treaties, to ban weapons, especially weapons of mass destruction. All this is doing to restore peace in the troubled areas. Now a very dangerous situation in Ukraine, Iran and other very important countries. For a good vital blow to crime, because the terrorists have income from the sale of drugs and weapons. For a successful fight against terrorism must be destroyed not only a terrorist organization, but a crime. It is necessary to wage war against the world of evil in General. We have to save succeeding generations from the terrorist attacks.


Pauel: перед very не надо артиклей
Pauel: very important - лишнее...
Pauel: и в этом же предложении: Now there are very dangerous situation... предложение без глагола не несет смысла... в данном случае подходит связка there are - "существует"
Pauel: For a good vital blow to crime - как будет по-русски все предложение в оригинале?
Lera29: необходимо нанести хороший удар по преступности, потому что террористы имеют хороший доход от продажи наркотиков и оружия.
Pauel: я никогда не слышал выражения vital blow.. это идиома?
Lera29: это переводчик
Pauel: it needs to struct a vital blow againist crime, because the...
Pauel: vital blow оказывается что то типа нокаута... больше ошибок не вижу
Lera29: спасибо огромное. удачи вам. отпишитесь ниже я вас отмечу, как лучшим.

Ответы

Ответ дал: Pauel
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Every day many people are killed due to terrorism. Fear for our parents, children and friends accompanies us. People seek security and governments support them. For solving the problems of terrorism governments of different countries strive to establish lasting peace in the world. So they start to cooperate with each other or unite for international meetings, summits, discussions on problems of war and peace, sign treaties, ban weapons, especially weapons of mass destruction. It's all done for restore peace in the troubled areas. Now there are very dangerous situations in Ukraine, Iran and other countries. It needs to struct a vital blow againist crime, because the terrorists have income from the sale of drugs and weapons. For a successful fight against terrorism must be destroyed not only a terrorist organization, but a crime. It is necessary to wage war against the world of evil in General. We have to save succeeding generations from the terrorist attacks.
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