Question

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My name is ___ . I’m 14 years old. I was born on Jule12th, 2001 in Kharkiv. I live with my mom, dad, grandfather and uncle. Also in the village I have a grandmother and uncle. I have four best friends, with whom we often walk, go to movies and take pictures.
From 2 to 6 years old I went to the garden, which also had a lot of children, with whom I am learning right now.
At 6 years old the first time I went to school. From the very first class of my favorite subjects were creative. I want to be an excellent student, but I can not because of my assessment of 9 in algebra. By the end of the year I promise to fix them.
I like to draw since childhood, but seriously, I started to do it in 12 years. I go to extra classes and try to draw dedicate as much time as possible.
I have a white cat Alaska, which I got for this new year. I wanted a cat for a long time and still can not stop rejoicing. On my family's summer residence live dog Percy, whom we picked up on the street. It is a huge and angry-looking, but still, who played with him say that he is good-natured.
Every summer I will go to the summer house and to the village, where I spend most of their holidays.
This summer I was in Kiev for the first time and I really liked this city.
I am sure I will visit it many more times.

Answer 1

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Answer 2

My name is ___ . I’m 14 years old. I was born on July12th, 2001 in Kharkiv. I live with my mom, dad, grandfather and uncle. I also have a grandmother and uncle who live in a village. I have four best friends, with whom I often go out for a walk, go to movies and take pictures.
At the age of 2 to 6 years old I went to kindergarden, where there also were a lot of children, with whom I am at the same class now.
At the age of 6 I started going to school. From the very first year at school my favorite subjects were the creative ones. I want to be an excellent student, but I can not because I have rate 9 in Algebra. By the end of the year I promise I will have fixed that.
I like drawing since my childhood, but I started doing it seriously when I was 12. I go to some extra classes and I try to dedicate as much time as possible to drawing.
I have a white cat named Alaska, which I got as a present for this New Year. I had wanted a cat for a long time and still can not stop rejoicing. At my family's summer residence lives a dog called Percy, whom we picked up on the street. It is a huge and angry-looking, yet those who have played with him say that he is good-natured.
Every summer I go to the summer house and to the village, where I spend most of my holidays.
This summer I was in Kiev for the first time and I really liked the city.
I am sure I will visit it many more times.