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My name is Ann. I'm in the 10th form, at the Larzha school. I like my school, however, if I were a director, I would try to make school everyday more fun and better.
First of all, what I would do is improve the food in the dining room. I would add more fruit to the menu of the dining room and exclude the compote from dried fruits. Secondly, I would increase the time of the changes, since the children must have time to do all their business. I would increase the fall and winter holidays so that the children can rest with their family or spend time with benefit. I would introduce excursions and trips to the school schedule so that the children would get acquainted with new places. I would make a separate room in the school of my dreams, with sofas, pillows, and blankets, so that the students could have a good rest or get warm.
The school of my dreams is a school in which every student will come with joy and try not to miss classes.

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