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Postcard to my friend

Dear ********

Here we’re in Dubai having a great time. The weather is hot. We’re staying in the seven star hotel Burj Al Arab. Hotel is the best and it is built in the form of a sail. There are 60 floors and we are living in a luxe room , which is located on the 55th floor. We have got a wonderful view of the sea from our bedroom. Yesterday we went to the highest building in the world to Burj Khalifa. We went up to observation deck, which is located on the 148th floor. When we saw to the Dubai from observation deck, we were surprised. Here it has an amazing view to the Dubai. Then went to the restaurant “Atmosphere” and we had lunch. Restaurant is located on the 122th floor. It was nice, romantic, the food was delicious and had a brilliantly view to the town. At 6 p.m. o’clock we left the world’s tallest building. Then we went see fountain show of Dubai. It located near of Burj Khalifa. There were a lot of people. But we saw a dancing fountain from 7:00p.m. till 10:00p.m. It turns out this fountain , one of the largest and highest in the world It was amazing show and beautiful day.

Today we’re going to the beach. We want to relax from noisy city.

Tomorrow we will walk around the city in Rollis-Royse. I’m waiting for tomorrow day.

After tomorrow we will fly back to Kazakhstan.

See you soon!

Answer 1

First I want you to know that I'm 13 years old,but I started studying english  when I was only 7, so I want to say, that I can help you, though I'm not sure that the answer is right.

Dear ********

Here, in Dubai, we're having a great time. The weather is hot. We’re staying in the seven star hotel Burj Al Arab. Hotel is the best and it is built in the form of a sail. There are 60 floors and we are living in a luxe room , which is located on the 55th floor. We have got a wonderful view of the sea from our bedroom. Yesterday we went to the highest building in the world, to Burj Khalifa. We went up to the observation deck, which is located on the 148th floor. When we saw  Dubai from the observation deck, we were surprised. Here, it has an amazing view of Dubai. Then we went to the restaurant “Atmosphere” and we had lunch. Restaurant is located on the 122th floor. It was nice, romantic, the food was delicious and it had a brilliant view of the town. At 6 p.m. o’clock we left the world’s tallest building. Then we went to see  the fountain show of Dubai. It is located near  Burj Khalifa. There were a lot of people. we were watching the dancing fountain from 7:00p.m. till 10:00p.m. It turns out, this fountain is one of the largest and highest in the world. It was amazing show and beautiful day.

Today we’re going to the beach. We want to relax from the noisy city.


Tomorrow we will walk around the city in Rollis-Royse. I’m waiting for tomorrow. 

 The day after tomorrow we will fly back to Kazakhstan.

See you soon!