Question

Ребят, правильно ли я написала прилашение ?
Проверьте пожалуйста на запятые и т.д
Заранее спасибо!
Hi, Nastya
I am celebrating the passing of exams and in this occasion I have a party at home. I invite 6 friends and 2 cousins. I plan to go to karaoke games at 6:30. Next we watch the DVD The Dark Knight.
My mom will make a cake and pizza at 7:30, and Dad will make us fruit smoothies. Our party will end at 10 pm- I hope you will come.
See you soon,
Kate

Answer 1

Вроде все правильно)

Answer 2

Все правильно! Вроде